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Character List
-Mr. Sontrex-Owner of Sontrex Inc, wanting to sell his product and become rich and famous
-Hoggy-Mr.Sontrex’s assistant, a teenager who is scared of Sontrex
-Sheik-A young, mischievous man, also a thief trying to become rich
-Lillian-Sheik’s assistant, hates Sheik’s ways, but is forced to work for him. She feels something is missing.
-Miguel-A mysterious man
-Maxwell and Samuel-Two young boys in search of adventure and something that’s missing
-Ike-An Athenian Soldier, valiant and courageous
-Roy-An Athenian Soldier, brave
-Marth- A Japanese-Speaking Athenian Soldier, in training
-Elincia-Queen of Athena
-Sothe-King of Athena
-Drew-Miguel’s friend, fight for the cause
-Kyle-Miguel’s friend, fight for the cause
-Latesha-Miguel’s girlfriend
-Rosalina-A mysterious princess
-Red-A strange God, ruler of the Chamber of Secrets, mean and evil
-Blue, Green, Yellow-Red’s assistants, called the alloys, agree with Red for everything
-Orange, Violet, Indigo-The alloy’s assistants called the secondary, who feel abandoned
-Rainbow-The alloys plus the secondary combined
-Keroro-Ruler of Mt.Cipe, kind hearted
-Tekkal-Ruler of Mt.Epic, mean
-Alo-Ruler of time, space and the balance of the universe, kind
-Thigishu-Owners of Odnetnin, a popular video game company
-Irak, Raki, Ikar and Kira, Ness, Olimar, Jigglypuff- C.O.S. challengers
-Captain Falcon-A stubborn racer
-Pit-An angel who is mortal from being punished by Gods
-Epicoa-A weird person who says epic things
-Samus- C.O.S.’s warrior
-Grandpa, Grandma and Charlie-Readers of the Book
EpicQuest: The Mysteries of The Holon Secrets
Everywhere
Everyone’s house was broadcasted a message via any electronic they were using. “Hi,” said Red. “Come to Mt.Cipe for a chance to find the Holon Secrets! You can be rich and famous! You can even make a wish and it will come true. There aren’t many slots available so hurry up!”
Seavaliss Isle, Tokyo, 6:00
“Miguel…” said the spirit. “The balance is being upset. Too many people are learning about the Holon Secrets, and the alloys might be able to come to power…You must get to the holon secrets and save the balance or the universe will die. But first, pick up two young boys in Athena, who are trying to find their true selves, and take them with you. Go. Miguel, go.” Miguel woke up. “Whoa, that was a weird dream,” said Miguel, heading to Mt.Cipe.
Mt.Cipe, 7:00
Sheik looked around the mountain. “Keroro?” The green creature stepped onto the ground. “I know, you are here for the holon secrets. I am the ruler of Mt.Cipe. To reach the Holon Secrets, you must go through the Chamber of Secrets, aka the Great Maze. Enter here,” he said, pointing to a rock formation which moved to reveal a passage. Good luck.” Suddenly a man appeared. “Hi! I’m Slippy! I’ll come with you!” Sheik smiled. “It’s real. We’re as good as rich!” he said, ignoring Slippy and jumping in the passage. “Uh, sure. You can come with us…” said Lillian.
Mt.Cipe, 7:30
Miguel climbed up Mt.Cipe, but went past the secret passage. He continued climbing. “Drew,” he said, speaking into the inter-dimensional transmitter, “I’m going through the second, higher passage of Mt.Cipe and I’ll be at Athena in ten minutes. Meet you there. “
Sontrex Inc., 7:30
“Look!” said Mr.Sontrex, pointing out the window at Mt.Cipe. “There! A man! Nobody climbs Mt.Cipe unless they’re hiding! Hey, it might be that escaped prisoner! We can gain power if we catch them. C’mon!”
Athena Village, Tharanglow, An Alternate Universe, 7:40
Miguel walked into the village elder’s house. “Hello, it’s me, Miguel,” he said to the elder. “Yes, its good to see you, Miguel. Are you here to pick up the boys?” she asked. “Yes.” Then two young boys walked in. “I’m Maxwell!” said the first. “I’m Samuel!” said the second. Then two young men walked in. “Drew! Kyle! I know its early, but all five of us are going to find the Holon Secrets.” Kyle smiled. “Great.” “So,” said Sam. “Who are you?” “We,” said Drew. “Are epic warriors, fighting to help save innocent lives, keep peace and keep the balance of the universe, well, balanced. Max and Sam were very excited. “Um, ok. Anyway, a great adventure! I bet its going to be epic!” said Max. “Oh, it will be.” said Kyle as they headed for Mt.Epic.
“Did you hear that?” asked Captain Falcon, an old, stubborn racer, trying to make a living. “Yes,” said Pit, an angel that was punished for trying to steal heavenly documents and cursed to be a mortal. “Let’s follow them.”
Athena Battlegrounds, 8:15
“ I hate this Athenian VS. Crimean War!” said Ike, a Athenian Military Swordsman. “I know!” said Roy, Ike’s partner. “そのそう愚か!” (Translation: It’s so stupid!) said Marth, an ally of the comrades. “Gosh, Marth. Stop speaking Japanese!” said Roy. “私は他のどの言語も話すことができない” said Marth. (Translation: I can’t speak any other language!) “Well, learn!” said Roy, kicking an enemy soldier. “実際に時間、私達は戦争にあるが、私はそれ調査する” said Marth. (Translation: Not really the time since we’re in a war, but I’ll look into it.) “Hey, look!” said Ike. “Some solider dropped a piece of paper. It says-‘ after the war, lets go find the Holon Secrets at Mt.Epic, a myth I learned about.’ “Cool!” said Roy. “大きい! 驚くばかり! 完全! 端正な音! 行くために割り当てる!” said Marth. (Translation: Great!) “Yes, and we should bring our parents, Sothe and Elincia.” said Ike.
Chamber Of Secrets F1, 8:45
Sheik, Lillian and Slippy walked along a strange blue walkway. “Its so cold in here.” said Slippy. Suddenly a strange figure appeared. “Hi! I’m Epicoa! I’m the epicest person ever! Microscopic blueberries comply with Tony Hawk’s LCBO Constitution!” Sheik was in shock. “Uh….” he stammered. “I’m. s-s-scared of you,’ said Slippy. “Because I can’t t-t-tell if you’re a boy or a gril, and y-y-our too e-e-pic!” Epicoa just smiled. “See you later, homecats on stilts. Alejandro pudding!” And he/she/it disappeared.
Chamber Of Secrets, F1, 9:00
Suddenly, a ripple of time and space caused the blue walkway to flicker, and Slippy fell into darkness. “Easy come easy go,” said Sheik. Lillian rolled her eyes. “Look!” she said. “He dropped a weird device.” Sheik shrugged. “We’ll keep it. Check it out later.” Then they all fell to Basement Floor Negative 2.
Chamber Of Secrets, B-2, 9:30
“Hello,” said Red, the ruler of the C.O.S. “Everybody, meet your competition!” Everyone in the chamber of secrets was gathered there. Well, almost everybody. “I’m Red, the leader. My teammates are Blue, Green and Yellow. Together, we’re the Alloys!” Another three spirits came in. “What about us?” they said, shivering. “Indigo, Violet and Orange?” Red smiled. “Yeah, they aren’t important. “So, our competitors are: Team 1. Lillian and Sheik! Team 2 Miguel, Drew, Kyle, Maxine and Samantha! Team 3 Ike, Roy, Elincia, Sothe and Marth! Team 4! Captain Falcon and Pit! Everyone will be given these wands to use unique powers or channel their own if they have any. Everyone will compete in challenges and the winners will be transported to the Holon Secrets and great power and riches. All slots are filled so any other competitor will not be able to enter. Good luck!” The teams cheered. Meanwhile, Mr.Sontrex and Hoggy were hiding. “Amazing! My cutting-edge skills have paid off and look where we are. I love me. Don’t you Hoggy?” Hoggy secretly rolled his eyes. “Yes, sir.”
Chamber Of Secrets, F3,10:30
“It’s time for Ike, Roy and Marth’s challenge!” said Red. “They must fight in a team battle against three COS challengers: Olimar, Ness and Jigglypuff. Marth snorted. Roy chuckled. Ike burst out laughing. “Begin!” said Red. Ness was a little kid, Olimar was a cute, tiny astronaut and Jigglypuff was a pink puffball. “Epic fail.” said Roy. Jigglypuff suddenly turned huge, but Roy just poked him and Jigglypuff fell into darkness. Then Olimar pulled a plant out of the ground and threw it at Elincia. “What is this?” said Elincia, throwing it away. “A pikmin,” said Olimar, who then got 100 pikmin and turned them into a bowling ball at Ike. He took out a buzzaw and cut them to bits. Olimar was shocked. “Good-bye,” he said. Sothe stared at him. “Ness! Stop playing the game Earthbound on your DSIXL, we’re going for a ride!” said Olimar, and the two jumped in the spaceship Onion. “It’s the end of day!” said Olimar, and then was the apocalypse. Elincia was killed by a giant plant. Roy fell into a crater. Ike, Sothe and Marth survived.
So then, when Olimar returned, Ike chopped Olimar and his Pikmin into salad using the last of his power to perform the Great Aether attack. But he forgot about Ness. Ness started flicking around a baseball bat, a yo-yo, and shot blasts of light and fire at the team. Then Ness used his signature move- psycho-kinetic starstorm, and raining meteors landed on Marth. “いいえ! お願いします! いいえ! 助け! ああ! それは傷つく! いいえ! 私は失う! 私は敗北させている! いいえ!” (Translation-Ow.) said Marth as he fell into darkness. Sothe used the last of his power to use Slash of Dawn. Ness was no more.
Chamber of Secrets, F16, 12:00
“Its time for Captian Falcon and Pit’s challenge! They are facing, Irak,Kira,Raki and Ikar!” Captain Falcon readied his punch. “Falcon-PUNCH!” and Irak was hit. “Man, he got PWNED!” said Pit. “You’re right!” said Captain Falcon. So he punched again and said “Falcon-PWNCH!” Irak was killed, and Raki and Ikar. But Kira lunged at Pit. “Kira-KWNCH!” she yelled. Falcon jumped in front of Pit, and sacrificed himself.“Pit’s arrow!” said Pit, shooting Kira. “I’ll miss you, Falcon.” he said, disappearing.
Chamber of Secrets, F20, June 14, 3:00 a.m.
“Lillian and Sheik’s challenge!” said Red. “They must face-Kyle.” Miguel was shocked. “That’s unfair!” he said. Red smiled. “Us alloys are here for entertainment. We’re putting this whole thing on Alloy-tube. We’re going for a million views.” Green laughed. “It’s going to be rad, yo.” Drew was taken aback. “This is bad.” Kyle frowned. “Guys, we have no choice. They’re too strong. Well, I am starting to feel weak, to weak to fight them.” Miguel nodded. “I know, its strange.” Drew looked at Kyle. “Well, good luck.”
The battle raged on. Kyle was forced to use his epic powers, but Sheik and Lillian were to fast. Sheik use spiked chain! Kyle dodged and used epic-beam. Lillian dodged. The battle lasted for hours until yellow came and said; “Time to mix it up! Lillian will be sent to the waiting room and will be replaced by MetaKnight. He is on no team.” Kyle sensed that the biggest threat was Sheik. But Sheik attacked MetaKnight. Metaknight used Galaxia Darkness on Kyle, and while his backed was turned, Sheik took out his pistol and shot him. Suddenly MetaKnight was enveloped in a bright light and revealed its true form: Lillian. “What!?” said Kyle and Sheik. “They, turned, me, into, MetaKnight. Sheik, you, killed.me…” she said coughing blood. Sheik looked horrified. “Lillian, I, have to tell you, I’ve always, secretly, loved you!!!!” Blue snorted. “Wow, this is so getting a LOL award.” he said. With that, Sheik shot himself with the pistol. Red shook his head. “No, this isn’t good. We need to spice it up again.” With that, he made a girl appear. Miguel, who was watching the entire ting on the challenge-cam, nearly had a seizure. “LATESHA!?” he yelled. Latesha was Miguel’s girlfriend until she was killed in a car accident. “Latesha looked at the camera. Miguel, if you’re watching this, know that I did not die that day. I looked dead, but I was just in a coma. You took me for granted and buried me-alive. Red found me and saved my life. You’ll pay for that. I’ll kill you when I’m done here. Then, she took unleashed a ball of energy at Kyle. Kyle was hit but then used the last of his energy to produce a Epic-Zero Star, which then shot at lightning speed at Latesha. “I’m sorry, Miguel” he said, as Latesha was killed in an envelope of dark light. Miguel started crying. But then, the dark light shrunk into Slippy’s device, held by Latesha. “Slippy’s toy came in handy!” said Latesha, who clicked a button that shot the star back at Kyle. Kyle, with no energy left, had no choice but to take the hit. “Kyle, no!” said Drew, beside Miguel. Kyle was killed. Red clapped. “Great show. Miguel’s challenge, VS. Latesha!” Miguel gasped. “I…can’t…do it…” said Miguel. “But I can!” said Latesha. “Miguel, you have to. She really did die that day. Red found her body and possessed it with dark power. She’s evil. If you die, she’ll kill the boys.” said Kyle, now a voice in his head. Suddenly, a princess came riding on a motor bike. “Miguel, my name is Rosalina.” Rosalina started playing wonderful music and it gave Miguel the courage to defeat Latesha. “I’m sorry, Miguel. I must go, I will see you all again…” she said, disappearing into a portal. Miguel had turned Latesha into a tablet. As he dried up his tears, he put the tablet in his pocket.
Chamber Of Secrets, F50, 10:00 a.m.
“Its time for two challenges!” said Red. “Drew’s challenge, VS. our challenger, Wolf, and Ike!” Drew nodded. “I’m ready.” Red snickered. “And, Max and Sam’s challenge! VS. Each other!” Miguel covered his face. “Oh, no.” “Miguel!” said Kyle. “You have to kill Red.” Miguel breathed hard. “I can’t, too weak.” Kyle realized something. “The wands. They’re draining your power, going to Red.” Red heard the voice. “Aha. Its true. But now, I almost have just enough power to take form! No longer a spirit!” Miguel got everyone to snap their wands in half. “Yes,” said Red. “But I’m still getting power. I don’t know from who, but another two with wands. Almost, yes! I am now solid!” Max began to cry. “I have to kill, my brother?” he said. Red laughed. “Yes. And if you don’t, I’ll kill both of you! Hahaha! I win! I always win!” Kyle remembered something. “Miguel, these two boys are looking for their true forms. I sense that they have epic powers in their re form. If you can get them free, their powers plus yours and Drew’s will be enough to take down Red. But, how…” Miguel knew the only way. “I have to sacrifice myself.” Kyle knew it too. “Yes, but you would also need dark power. We don’t have any dark power.” Miguel suddenly jumped into the portal to Max and Sam’s challenge. “Miguel!” said Max. “You have five minutes to kill each other or you die.” he said. “Miguel, what do we do?” said Sam. “Epic-Sacrifice!” yelled Miguel. “What, no!” said Max. Miguel burst into green light, then the stone tablet in his pocket went into the green light and mixed. The tablet was full of dark power from Latesha. It formed rainbow light which shot out into two crystals. “Get them!” said Sam. “No!” said Red, shooting a blast of Red light at the crystals, pushing them away. “Team! Assemble!” he yelled. All of the colors began merging. Orange, indigo and violet refused. “No! I will not join you!” But the vacuum of the assembly sucked them in and formed an Evil Rainbow Alloy. The Rainbow Alloy easily overpowered the boys. “Over my dead body!” said Epicoa, suddenly appearing! “The child-like empress comes in many flavours; 1:Homecats with spice, 2: Benjamin Franklin, 3: Cheese with shabalabadindong rice, 4: Bin-duh-avada-kadabra-duh-er.” The rainbow alloy was frozen. “So…epic…” it stuttered. “Now’s our chance!” said Sam, and they two boys grabbed their crystal. They turned into their true forms: The Queens of Athena. “Maxine!” said Max. “Samantha!” said Sam. “No! I had to lock your forms with epic powers away, you were a threat But now, oh no…” said Red. “Epic-Double-Pulse!” yelled the Epic-Queens. who had full epic energy. Drew appeared from his successful challenge and added to their attack with his power. It wasn’t enough, but Drew took out Ike’s sword and used it to fuel his power. The Rainbow Alloy burst into a million grains of dust. Suddenly, Alo, the ruler of time and space appeared. “Thank you for restoring balance by stopping Rainbow.” he said. Then he made an elevator out of the chamber. “Good luck!” he said, disappearing. Suddenly, a woman in a power suit appeared and blasted Epicoa. The she got ready to use her zero laser. “I am Samus Aran!” She yelled. “Max and Sam! Loan me your powers! Trust me!” then the combined power let Drew use Epic-Sheild and reflected the blow, killing him and Samus. But her electric whip came flying out of her zero suit and killed Max and Sam. Alo appeared, disintegrating. “Oh, no,” the balance of the worlds…” Mr. Sontrex and Hoggy came out of hiding. “I’m so weak,” said Hoggy. “Nobody cares!” said Mr.Sontrex, as they leaped on the elevator and escaped the Chamber. “We made it…” said Mr.Sontrex. “The Holon Secrets.” There was a greedy look in his eyes. “Hoggy, a long time ago, there was a man named Thigishu, owner of ODNETNIN of Japan. I tried to sell my product, the GCP, but he just mocked me. I swore revenge.” Then, Tekkal, ruler of Mt.Epic and the Holon Secrets, appeared. “What is your wish?” Mr.Sontrex smiled. “I wish all of the people in Tokyo were dea-“ But then Pit appeared. “Stop! Do not harm innocent souls. You’re turning evil.” Mr.Sontrex screamed. “Agh! I don’t care! I have a better wish! I wish everyone on Earth were my slav-“ But Pit shot him with his arrow. Hoggy smiled. But the universe was crumbling apart. “I have to restore balance by saving Max and Sam.” Tekkal frowned. “You can only wish for one thing.” Pit looked at Hoggy. “We need to each wish for one of them to be alive…” Hoggy covered his face. “I already made my wish, that you would save me. We can’t restore balance. We’ll all die. “ Pit pulled his hair. “All those innocent lives, taken, for nothing.” They cried. “Wait!” he said. “Tekkal, do I have a wish for you! I wish I controlled Mt.Epic!” Tekkal smiled. “You found the loophole. But loopholes will cause the balance to die even faster. Hurry.” Pit closed his eyes. “I wish that every hero that died because of the Holon Secrets were revived.” he said, as Mt.Epic crumbled into nothingness. All the heroes appeared on a beach. “Yes, I did it!” Pit said. Alo appeared. “You did. Rainbow is stopped, the chamber’s dark ways are gone. You revealed Max and Sam’s true forms. You saved the balance. You are a hero. Mt. Epic is gone, but it is for the best.” He gave Pit a legendary crown and was gone. “Thanks, Drew, Kyle, Miguel, and Pit.” said Maxine. “Thanks for everything.” said Samantha. Then, out of nowhere, Rosalina appeared. “Now that I have you all here, I can take what is rightfully mine!” she yelled. With that, she used Epic-Judge, and a box appeared. “If a number between 2 and 9 appear, you die. If one appears, I die.” “After all this…” said Drew. The box blinked a two. “So close, so epic…” said Miguel, as all the heroes were killed. “Finally, the grand star!” said Rosalina, and a bit of star came from all the heroes and merged into a big power star. “I win!” she said, But the Grand Star overpowered her, and then the Universe exploded.
“The End.” said Grandpa. “Wow, that story was epic, but there were some many characters I didn’t understand.” said Charlie, a young boy. “Look what I found!” said Grandma. “EpicQuest: The Mysteries Of The Holon Secrets, The Full Story.” Charlie smiled. “Cool! I can’ t wait to read it!” Then a red dragon stepped on their house.
The End?
No, too be continued.
